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Writing academically

Academic writing at university level follows a distinct style and structure. It requires clarity, a critical approach to demonstrate understanding, and proper referencing of sources. The three aspects of academic writing:

Academic writing is formal and objective. It avoids informal language, personal opinions, and unsupported claims.

Below are common issues and how to improve them:

What to avoid

Examples

Suggested alternative

Slang or causal expressions It was a dead loss It failed
Contractions It'll, didn't, weren't It will, did not, were not
First person (unless reflective) I carried out a survey A survey was carried out
Exclamation marks ! Avoid using them
Basic or vague language like, big, stuff Be specific, for example, large
Subjective statements The results were brilliant The results were interesting because...
Unsupported claims 20% of wildlife is in danger Add a reference to where you got this information

Effective academic writing should be:

  • Clear and precise
  • Objective and reasoned
  • Cautious in its claim
  • Properly referenced
  • Written in appropriate verb tense
  • Often structured using the passive voice (e.g. the data was analysed)
  • Organised with signposting to guide the reader through the argument.

Academic writing has a recognisable style and structure. There are several models for structuring academic writing. Choosing the right one depends on your subject, assessment type, and the complexity of your argument.

Model

Structure

Best for

Sandwich Model Introduction → Main Body → Conclusion Short essays, beginners, general academic writing
Hourglass Model Broad Introduction → Focused Analysis → Broad Conclusion Analytical essays, critical thinking, exploring wider implications
Diamond Model Simple Introduction → Increasing Complexity → Clear Summary Essays with layered arguments, multiple perspectives, or nuanced analysis

The sandwich model is a useful starting point:

  • Introduction: Define the topic, outline your argument, and explain your approach.
  • Main Body: Each paragraph presents one point, supported by evidence and analysis. Use topic sentences and concluding sentences to guide the reader.
  • Conclusion: Summarise your main points, restate your argument, and reflect on its significance. Do not introduce new information.

Understanding this structure also improves reading. Most academic texts follow a familiar pattern, introduction, main body, and conclusion. Recognising this helps you identify key points and follow the author’s argument, even in complex writing.

University-level writing requires more than description, it demands analysis. Ask questions such as:

  • Why did this happen?
  • How do we know?
  • What does this mean?

Critical thinking involves examining evidence, interpreting its significance, and considering implications. When using an author’s ideas, describe their point, interpret it, and, where appropriate, suggest future directions. This shows deeper engagement with the material.

Referencing is essential in academic writing. It acknowledges the work of others, supports your argument, and helps avoid plagiarism. It also allows readers to locate the original sources. There are different referencing styles (e.g. Harvard, OSCOLA) so you will need to find out which style your School uses.

Referencing handbooks can be downloaded from the Library’s Referencing and Plagiarism pages.